Tuesday 2 October 2012

Words that can make a sentence. Seriously.

Miss Yoon asked  us to form a thesis statement and 3 topic sentences from the words we found in the newspapers. We have cut the words, run to our paper then paste it. We're running like little kids, but it's fun, and it's really interesting. So here they are.


 The Importance of Preserving Our Seas

Thesis statement :  It's important to keep our seas preserved to prevent the extinction of marine life as they are threatened by pollution. Secondly, a preserved sea will ensure a clean beach so that our next generations can enjoy the beauty of well cared beaches. Last but not least, we need to keep our beaches clean and preserved to keep the ecosystem in balance because if one of these main factors are extinct, the whole ecosystem will be at risk. 

Topic sentences :
1. to prevent the extinction of marine life.
2. to ensure a clean beach
3. to keep the ecosystem in balance

That's the best I can think of. Man this is kinda hard.

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