Wednesday 26 September 2012

Tutorial number dos.


Tutorial 2
Causes of motor vehicle accidents

Thesis statement:
Accidents. Does it sound really familiar? Yes it does, because it happened every single day. Every day, countless lives have been lost in accidents involving motor vehicles. It seemed like a normal thing that these accidents happen. But does anyone really know why motor vehicle accidents happen? Many can argue how these accidents came about but the need for overcoming these causes is a must to prevent any more lost lives.

Topic statement:
1.       The first cause of motor vehicle accidents is the carelessness of the drivers.
2.       Secondly, the weather is really a big factor of why these accidents had happened.
3.       Last but not least, the condition of the car can really affect how the driving will be good or it can go awry.            

1 comment:

  1. Your thesis statement is actually your introduction.

    A thesis statement combines all the three main ideas of the topic sentences.

    The main causes of accidents are...

    Interesting introduction.

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